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Offline farahnaazz

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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #15 on: June 20, 2009, 08:45:22 AM »
hI FRENDS...
Today as our RTW has overcome a massive setback...its all anew beginning once more..i know...we gonna rock again..i just thot of sharing once again my 1st poem for rajjy...its one of the very first posts i made at rtw...i think in the mnth of nov08...
Today i just thot of reposting it...remembering those days,...and beleiving that we all will again make another history..
love u all..
Here is the poem....


Who is Rajat?

He is a magician!!
You won’t even know
he casts his spell,
see how his eyes
speak so well!!
Can’t you cease to stare
mesmerized by his charm,
on that cute face
even if you want!!
Spellbound you are
seeing a kid in front,
taking you away
with his skills and stunts.

He is a burgler!!
You  won’t even know
he’ll steal your  heart,
don’t trust his naïve eyes
they are so flirt!!
He’ll swipe you away
from yourself so neatly,
and make you go crazy
when he blushes so sweetly!!
Hold your breath
his styles can kill,
you may not know
you are trapped until.

He is a doctor!!
Nothing but like medicine
his smile revives,
even the dead, i swear
it can make alive!!
Hearing his voice
you forget every pain,
his innocent acts
never go in vain!!
How much you may be
morose and sad,
those funny gestures
would make you glad.

He is a king!!
His long blond hairs
see how they sway,
as he rides on horse
in such a gallant way!!
Flamboyant are his moves
with sword when he frays,
his elegance wins
his foes always.!!
Ruler he is of
millions of hearts,
unparalled his empire
is on whole earth.

He is a darling!!
I don’t lie
of every girl around,
ask each heart
doesn’t it pound?
He keeps on coming
in dreams day or night,
in life so harsh   
he is the only light.
As the days pass
and the more he grows,
the more you’ll love
him, cherish and adore.

He is a child
blessed by god,
with talents eternal,
and valour a lot!!
Shine on his fore head
and glint in his eyes,
he glares like sun
with virtues and wise!!
For this wonder boy
sky is no end!
he has to reach the stars
and outset a new trend!!!!

He is rajat!!


tuhi babyyyyyyy my melody queeen superb poetry you know tuhi baby if you could remember you know i have analysed your this poem and it is lost now if you could remember this was the first time we interacted aur bataaoon maine kya soncha thha i thought you are some 13 or 14 year old kid like blossy and i thought you are old member here because a girl with the same name exist on india forums i thought you are that girl
and how i addressed you like my little babyyyyy ohh my baby tuhinaa sweetheart kya tumhein pata hain tumne kitna achha likhaa hain these were my first words to you those memory delights me and im happy that now you are one of my bestest friend god bless you and keep rocking alwaysssssssss dear love love love you tuhi baby

you are melody queen of rajat world keep rocking and i love you friend blessingsssssss and hugs[/glow]

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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #15 on: June 20, 2009, 08:45:22 AM »


Offline aishwarya vaity

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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #16 on: June 20, 2009, 10:42:05 AM »
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wahh wahh subhanallah wahhhhhh tuhi di ur awesome yaar really talented nd yeah kya poem hai yaar i loved it yes he is none other thn our sweet heart <3 rajat tokasreally yaar kya lajawab poem hai w8ing for more poems di tc love u loads keep smiling hugs to u
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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #17 on: June 20, 2009, 12:46:53 PM »
awesome really lovely poem tuhina

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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #18 on: June 20, 2009, 01:53:46 PM »
hI FRENDS...
Today as our RTW has overcome a massive setback...its all anew beginning once more..i know...we gonna rock again..i just thot of sharing once again my 1st poem for rajjy...its one of the very first posts i made at rtw...i think in the mnth of nov08...
Today i just thot of reposting it...remembering those days,...and beleiving that we all will again make another history..
love u all..
Here is the poem....


Who is Rajat?

He is a magician!!
You won’t even know
he casts his spell,
see how his eyes
speak so well!!
Can’t you cease to stare
mesmerized by his charm,
on that cute face
even if you want!!
Spellbound you are
seeing a kid in front,
taking you away
with his skills and stunts.

He is a burgler!!
You  won’t even know
he’ll steal your  heart,
don’t trust his naïve eyes
they are so flirt!!
He’ll swipe you away
from yourself so neatly,
and make you go crazy
when he blushes so sweetly!!
Hold your breath
his styles can kill,
you may not know
you are trapped until.

He is a doctor!!
Nothing but like medicine
his smile revives,
even the dead, i swear
it can make alive!!
Hearing his voice
you forget every pain,
his innocent acts
never go in vain!!
How much you may be
morose and sad,
those funny gestures
would make you glad.

He is a king!!
His long blond hairs
see how they sway,
as he rides on horse
in such a gallant way!!
Flamboyant are his moves
with sword when he frays,
his elegance wins
his foes always.!!
Ruler he is of
millions of hearts,
unparalled his empire
is on whole earth.

He is a darling!!
I don’t lie
of every girl around,
ask each heart
doesn’t it pound?
He keeps on coming
in dreams day or night,
in life so harsh   
he is the only light.
As the days pass
and the more he grows,
the more you’ll love
him, cherish and adore.

He is a child
blessed by god,
with talents eternal,
and valour a lot!!
Shine on his fore head
and glint in his eyes,
he glares like sun
with virtues and wise!!
For this wonder boy
sky is no end!
he has to reach the stars
and outset a new trend!!!!

He is rajat!!


tuhi babyyyyyyy my melody queeen superb poetry you know tuhi baby if you could remember you know i have analysed your this poem and it is lost now if you could remember this was the first time we interacted aur bataaoon maine kya soncha thha i thought you are some 13 or 14 year old kid like blossy and i thought you are old member here because a girl with the same name exist on india forums i thought you are that girl
and how i addressed you like my little babyyyyy ohh my baby tuhinaa sweetheart kya tumhein pata hain tumne kitna achha likhaa hain these were my first words to you those memory delights me and im happy that now you are one of my bestest friend god bless you and keep rocking alwaysssssssss dear love love love you tuhi baby

you are melody queen of rajat world keep rocking and i love you friend blessingsssssss and hugs[/glow]
Really very pleasing memmories farah...
pata hai jab mai yeh poem parso post kar rahi thi then i was remembering that sweet analysis of urs..and regreting why didn't i save them...
This loss has been great ...poems i have got back but those translations and analysis;the poem which u wrote for me ..and palak's dhansoo comments and her poem too..u remember...and all those beautiful lines u wrote for me..I have lost...but unki dhumil chavi abhi bhi hai dimagh mein..aur jo hamesha rahegi...jise kabhi koi bhi hacker hack nahi kar sakta..
  Yes...i remember seeing ur first analysis  for this poem...i was like....sooooooooo happy...and thot ki yeh ladki hai ya jaadu...i was seriously impressed by ur kindness and ur words...
Pata lag gaya tha ki yeh koi poetess hai... ;) ;)..bahut hi good hearted...
And u know mujhe bhi laga tha ki tum schoolgoing koi pyari si ladki ho...hahahah ;) ;D
Seriously aaj bahut achha lag raha hai sab kuch yaad karke..
the journey down the lane of memmories of our frendship..
thanks for being u..
love u
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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #19 on: June 20, 2009, 01:55:49 PM »
:o ;) :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
wahh wahh subhanallah wahhhhhh tuhi di ur awesome yaar really talented nd yeah kya poem hai yaar i loved it yes he is none other thn our sweet heart <3 rajat tokasreally yaar kya lajawab poem hai w8ing for more poems di tc love u loads keep smiling hugs to u
:-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
thanks aish...love u sweety...
soon/ today only i will post a new poem...
love u
Where there is a will, there is a way!!

Offline Tuhina

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Re: MY FIRST POEM fOR RAJAT...ONCE MORE
« Reply #20 on: June 20, 2009, 01:57:06 PM »
awesome really lovely poem tuhina
thanksssssssss ....love u...
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